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... appointment at the dentist's will be now!!!


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photographer: Sayuri_Tanaka [link]
Maka Albarn: ~AleaRose24
Soul & editing: me
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Critique by Spectral-shadow Jan 14, 2012, 2:22:06 PM
So pretty damn epic, so since you asked for a critique there really isnt anything that i could find wrong with it.

The first thing i can point out is that well it dosnt look like there is motion, maka cosplayer dosnt look as if she is hitting him when it comes to her pose. But after all this is a static image so it would be hard to do so.

The expression of maka dosnt seem that angry (if she is trying to be anyway :3)

last thing is that the screen text dosnt look that good, maybe try making it more solid i dunno.

well this is just some little things i picked up on other then that it really does look awesome :3

<3 souleater
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:icondeathspell1995:
DeathSpell1995 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
How did you have the teeth like you did?
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
Bought them at dental distortions.
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:iconrominaisawesome:
Rominaisawesome Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lmao :D
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
:D
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:iconsasu-chanxnaru-chan:
Sasu-chanxNaru-chan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
How do you even teeth.....share with me your secrets
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Haha, you have to ask my mother ;P
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:iconsasu-chanxnaru-chan:
Sasu-chanxNaru-chan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
>:U i would if she had a DA -dies
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Haha, I made a joke^^

I bought them on dentaldistortions.com ;)
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:iconsasu-chanxnaru-chan:
Sasu-chanxNaru-chan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Professional General Artist
ahhh lol <_> thank you :3
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:iconsorenfreydust:
SorenFreyDust Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gott is das geil *_* mit welchem Programm bearbeitest du das?
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
Dankeschön. Mit photoshop.
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:iconsorenfreydust:
SorenFreyDust Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welche Version? Welches Tool? XD
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
Öh, Version 4. Tools probiere ich verschiedene aus, auch die ganzen Filter und so, aber genau weiß ich das nicht mehr, da ich mit dem Programm sehr unerfahren bin^^"
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teaunicorn Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Frequent issues in cosplays are the expression.
It's hard to take seriously when their grins are a mile long.

Other than that, FANTASTIC =D I love the last panel =P
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
Thank you :) Glad you like it.
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:iconteaunicorn:
teaunicorn Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I dooo =P
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:iconjazzthehedgehog:
jazzthehedgehog Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Soul got owned and the face in panel 2! Priceless :rofl: Great job~
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
Hurhur, thank you 8D For the fav as well.
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:iconjazzthehedgehog:
jazzthehedgehog Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome ^^
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Her-my-knee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Well, i can't give you an "official" critique, but I think the expressions are off. If it's an action shot, keep it an action shot by not having the characters look at the camera. Because then it looks staged.
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Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Also erstmal danke für deine Hinweise ... schreibe jetzt auf Deutsch, weil ich für Englisch zu doof bin xD
Die drei Bilder sind unabhängig von einander entstanden, da es ein kleines Shooting auf der FBM war. Für richtige Action Shots müsste man sich vorher mehr Gedanken machen, damit die Abfolge auch schlüssig wäre. So hab ich halt die passenden Fotos aneinander gefügt.
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Her-my-knee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Du bist im Gluck, weil ich ein bisschen Deutsch spreche :333 Ich liebe Deutsch sprechen.

Ah. Ok. Das macht Sinn. ;) :iconsoulsmirkplz:
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Ah sorry, I thought you are German, because of your location and your residence^^"
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:iconher-my-knee:
Her-my-knee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Das ist okay! Ich liebe Deutsch sprechen! :33
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
:)
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:iconher-my-knee:
Her-my-knee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Dein Title sollst "You're Next" sein. Englisch ist sehr kompliziert
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
No, it is right. "Your next ... appointment at the dentist's will be now" :)
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:iconher-my-knee:
Her-my-knee Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Ach, es tut mir leid!!!
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
It's okay^^
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:iconyuriyuri10:
Yuriyuri10 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! That;s really cool! I love it!
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
Thank you <3
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Yuriyuri10 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome!
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imblue36752100 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
That is some intense eye make-up.
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
Its more intense because of the comic look I made with the editor^^"
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:icon7dreams:
7dreams Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Photographer
das foto ist genial : D und die gesichter erst xD tolles bild xD
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
Dankeschön^^ Freut mich, dass es dir gefällt =)
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:iconanthrokagamine:
AnthroKagamine Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
I still cant get over how AWESOME u 2 look!!!!
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011
That is a great honour, because you can find so many really good and perfect Soul cosplayer here on DA. Thank you again =)
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:iconanthrokagamine:
AnthroKagamine Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
congrats and u r very right! ur very welcome!
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
I am only a tiny light^^"
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:iconanthrokagamine:
AnthroKagamine Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
well if u say but i still love ya cosplay
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2011
^3^
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:iconanthrokagamine:
AnthroKagamine Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
X'P
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:iconanthrokagamine:
AnthroKagamine Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
perhaps one of THE best soul eater evans cosplays ive seen!!! ooh and i love maka in this too
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011
WAAAAHHHHH!!! Thank youuuuu~ <3
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:iconanthrokagamine:
AnthroKagamine Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
U WELCOME!!!!
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Stormdeathstar9 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome teeth! And every thing!
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:iconpumkin-portfolio:
Pumkin-Portfolio Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Thank you^^ For the fave as well ;)
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:iconstormdeathstar9:
Stormdeathstar9 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your VERY welcome!
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GarnetGummyBears Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
lololololololololololol
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