So pretty damn epic, so since you asked for a critique there really isnt anything that i could find wrong with it.
The first thing i can point out is that well it dosnt look like there is motion, maka cosplayer dosnt look as if she is hitting him when it comes to her pose. But after all this is a static image so it would be hard to do so.
The expression of maka dosnt seem that angry (if she is trying to be anyway :3)
last thing is that the screen text dosnt look that good, maybe try making it more solid i dunno.
well this is just some little things i picked up on other then that it really does look awesome :3
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Well, i can't give you an "official" critique, but I think the expressions are off. If it's an action shot, keep it an action shot by not having the characters look at the camera. Because then it looks staged.
Also erstmal danke für deine Hinweise ... schreibe jetzt auf Deutsch, weil ich für Englisch zu doof bin xD Die drei Bilder sind unabhängig von einander entstanden, da es ein kleines Shooting auf der FBM war. Für richtige Action Shots müsste man sich vorher mehr Gedanken machen, damit die Abfolge auch schlüssig wäre. So hab ich halt die passenden Fotos aneinander gefügt.